【活动时间】：2015年10月17日周六14：00-16:00
【活动地址】：常州华通留学地址：常州市延陵西路99号嘉业国贸广场8层O座
【针对人群】：大学生
【活动看点】：优秀案例分享及解析；
如何准备材料才能脱颖而出？；
语言的处理和精进上需要遵循什么样的原则？；
硕士申请时间安排及签证注意事项。
【活动优惠】：
◇ 免费评估，力申全英排名前30位研究生院校；
◇ 友情提示：英国名校研究生申请需提前一年准备。
【案例篇】从内地TOP200到剑桥大学
申请人：L同学
申请背景：四川农业大学本科，资源环境和城乡规划管理专业，无雅思，GPA88，多次获得各类奖学金，有科研项目经验。
录取结果：剑桥大学MPhil in Planning, Growth and Regeneration；谢菲尔德大学MA Urban design and planning；卡迪夫大学Msc Spatial planning and development。
申请实况：
该学生有非常好的主观能动性，在进入材料制作的程序后，非常主动认真的配合我们常州华通留学的文书老师制作申请文书，把自己的背景优势和个性优势淋漓尽致的表现出来。
加上我们常州华通留学的文书老师本身英文功底非常不错，该生的文书出稿后水平非常高，很有竞争力！
学生就定了3所大学：剑桥大学、谢菲尔德大学和卡迪夫大学。
三个学校里面，剑桥大学世界排名前3，非常难申请。谢菲尔德大学是建筑相关专业领域的佼佼者，申请者非常多，竞争非常强。卡迪夫虽然专业排名在英国能进入前5，但是综合排名稍微弱了点。卡迪夫大学基本可以作为保底院校。
在10月份递出申请后，学生在12月初陆陆续续收到了包括剑桥在内的3个学校的录取。剑桥大学的录取让学生非常的惊喜。
看到学生能进入世界优质名校深造，我们常州华通留学的老师也非常有成就感，也由衷的为学生感到高兴。
【文书篇】美文节选1、 剑桥小作文（节选）
“My short term career goal is to become a product manager in medical industry. Since the aging problem before increasingly serious, the medical problems become more and more prominent, and gradually become one of the severe social problems in the focus of China. The present health care industry is basically harmonious, but it still has some problems. We need strengthen the self-management further under the condition of the market regulation malfunction. And my long term career goal is to work as a CEO and to be one of the major strategic decision makers in the company. I want to contribute my power to China’s medical treatment and to assist China to better integrate its economy into the rest of the world.”
2、 爱丁堡大学金融专业文书（节选）
“Additionally, as far as the educational content and quality are concerned, the postgraduate courses at Edinburgh provide the students with updated knowledge and skills in a global view. The lectures are given by the top professors and experts in the field with both academic and practical experience. When combined with interactive teaching methods, the courses become more operative and real-life orientated which contribute positively to the development of the students. Therefore, studying at University of Edinburgh would be a value-added process with instructive influence on my entire life. ”
3、巴斯大学文书（节选）
“A person with strong ability in self-expression, clearly logic and quite good English, both written and verbal, he made himself impressed as a comprehensive individual.
I think your program is suitable for him as it’s the field where he has a keen interest to pursue his further education. Also, with his academic excellence and strong potential, I am sure he will be well qualified for an advanced study in finance and management which could make him much more competent for his career in the future. ”
【活动跟进】
1：搜索号码“华通留学iae China”并关注
2：扫一扫下方的二维码，留学资讯一手掌握!
